HERE IS HOLLY’S MARMITE VEGEMITE CHALLENGE
“BANG!”
‘Dammit!’ yelled the Marmites.
Marmites and Vegemites were in the final of the volleyball tournament, but only one team can make it to nationals.
Score tied 22-22.
Vegemites ace spiked a ball – could not be stopped.
Marmites turn to serve. They had no choice but to give it all they’ve got to get ahead.
The game so far:
- The captain of the Vegemite team secretly likes Marmite.
- Both team captains have secrets that they can’t hide forever.
- Players – Marmite smart plays.
- Sworn enemies
- Vegemite Gruesome.
- Ms. Mitealot
- Sir Adams Vege
Vegemites ace spiker? ‘No,’ he said, “ I like Marmite.’
HOLLY – YEAR 8
Hi Holly!
As an American, I’m unfamiliar with both Marmite and Vegemite, so I had to do a bit of internet research to find out more…I’m not convinced I’d liked either one. 🙂
You took a creative approach to this prompt which made it a fun read! Also, how you chose to structure your writing with short sentences and bullet point listing added added to the mood of the story-it felt fast-paced and energetic.
Keep writing!
Francine (Team 100WC)
Twin Cities, Minnesota USA