DAVE HAS A FUNNY STORY!
Exhausted, and shocked I can’t believe Lewis would do this. He jumped from one building to the other barely making it.
“I’m trying to hold on,” he shouted as his fingers slipped one by one.
“Well try harder!” I shout as I dial 111 in a hurry.
They head over as quick as the speed of sound. Worried and confused I approach him and he screams out loud.
“ YES, I got it!” he shouted with excitement.
He looks at me as if nothing happened. I then begin to wonder why he risked so much just for a stupid Pokemon card.
DAVE – YEAR 8
Dear Dave,
Great work. Your story was very creative and humorous. You imported the prompt well. Keep up the great work.
Sincerely Julia
Dear Dave,
Your story started of rather nervous, but ended really funny! Why would your friend jump buildings for a Pokémon card? I liked this very much!
Keep writing,
Jun
Grade 5,IL,USA
Hi Dave,
I really liked your story and the humor you included in it. Your title really fits your amazing story. I hope to read more of your writing soon!
Hi Dave
I really enjoyed your 100WC, especially the twist at the end. It made for a really fun read. Well done.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand